Pat Nolan, Keith Abbott, Maureen Owen, Michael Sowl

 


PURPLE PETALS RENKU


Morning sun

        the purple petals
four have fallen

morning sun
        the purple petals
four have fallen
the white pines are still dreaming
up to their necks in the mist

the white pines are still dreaming
up to their necks in the mist
        red tail hawk banks
out of the shadows
        eye-opening silence

        red tail hawk banks
out of the shadows
        eye-opening silence
your car in the curve of road
your face passing out of sight

your car in the curve of road
your face passing out of sight
        lukewarm tea in a used glass
smelling faintly of wine
        me and the moon

        lukewarm tea in a used glass
smelling faintly of wine
        me and the moon
Quiet! Quiet! too quiet

my neighbor's ratty muffler brings relief

Quiet! Quiet! too quiet

my neighbor's ratty muffler brings relief
        wheels on wet asphalt?
just a rush of wind through the trees
        one drop then two

        wheels on wet asphalt?
just a rush of wind through the trees
        one drop then two
the couple next door argue
I listen from the pony's stall

the couple next door argue
I listen from the pony's stall
        such precise instructions
"Cut that hedge high enough
        to piss behind"

        such precise instructions
"Cut that hedge high enough
        to piss behind"
those hands crossed behind your back
name a better place to be

those hands crossed behind your back
name a better place to be
        or dialing late night
moon's face on the water's cheek
        numbers in the dark

        dialing late night
moon's face on the water's cheek
        numbers in the dark
tossed about by waves
one mind one minute then not

tossed about by waves
one mind one minute then not
        rainy Venice
in a cafe French tourists compare
        photos of grand kids

        rainy Venice
in a cafe French tourists compare
        photos of grandkids
ink brush on a white circle
enough to empty my heart

ink brush on a white circle
enough to empty my heart
        chair pillowed with snow
old vine red in a milk glass
        alone toasting stars

        chair pillowed with snow
old vine red in a milk glass
        alone toasting stars
stepping from the dark hallway
into Ben's bright studio

stepping from the dark hallway
into Ben's bright studio
        blazing sunshine but
only hot house flowers here
        absurd wind chill temps

        blazing sunshine but
only hot house flowers here
        absurd wind chill temps
inside the game of waiting
a view of the other game

inside the game of waiting
a view of the other game
        neighbor's upper story
window no more
        an explosion of new leaves

        neighbor's upper story
window no more
        an explosion of new leaves
up old streets
seeing houses where
friends once lived
I live twice

up old streets
seeing houses where
friends once lived
I live twice
        "getting a leg up"
smoking grass while on acid
        Big Sur long agone

        "getting a leg up"
smoking grass while on acid
        Big Sur long agone
birds rise all of a sudden
flapping above an orange line

birds rise all of a sudden
flapping above an orange line
        obsession she said
shattered apart the pieces
        still formed the plank's shape

        obsession she said
shattered apart the pieces
        still formed the plank's shape
her garden seems so calm
in the twilight gnats swarm

her garden seems so calm
in the twilight gnats swarm
        how could I forget
at the doorstep picking
        burrs off a pant leg

        how could I forget
at the doorstep picking
        burrs off a pant leg
painting the walls a bright white
taking down the old pictures

painting the walls a bright white
taking down the old pictures
        "Don't ever ever
(I promise. You promise too.)
        forget the flowers."

        "Don't ever ever
(I promise. You promise too.)
        forget the flowers."
broken arm
wind off Lake St. Clair
musty gauze and plaster smell

broken arm
wind off Lake St. Clair
musty gauze and plaster smell
        "Can you see the moon?"
but no moon in any window
        all angles just night

        "Can you see the moon?"
but no moon in any window
        all angles just night
out of the darkest valleys
we sing our redemption songs

out of the darkest valleys
we sing our redemption songs
        first the rain
then the unmistakable frogs
        mail box empty again

        first the rain
then the unmistakable frogs
        mail box empty again
an ordinary normal morning
a ladder leans

an ordinary normal morning
a ladder leans
        on the window pane
the fat winter fly
        can't evade the cat

        on the window pane
the fat winter fly
        can't evade the cat
the image of obstruction
small joining into the large

the image of obstruction
small joining into the large
        snow plow fills in
what I just shoveled out
        North Country Zen exercise

        snow plow fills in
what I just shoveled out
        North Country Zen exercise
deep amber of oversteeped tea
these shorter days so very similar

12/30/94


© by Keith Abbott, Maureen Owen, Pat Nolan, Michael Sowl
hokku by
Jack Kerouac

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